Portfolio Reflection

i dont have very many strengths as a writer. im not very good at coming up with thing to write about.peoms because they are easier to write.the worst would have to be essays because it is hard to come up with thing to write about.i dont have very many writing habits at all. spelling and gammer are the biggest problems i uncounter. to have good writes and get them done one time.

Piece Reflection

My goals for this piece was to get it done and have people like it and what to read it. i began this piece by think about people that i have lost. And that they will never b coming back in to my life.i ended it saying that even though u lost one friend rthat there is many differnet other friends you could make.i didn't really encounter any problems with this piece. i chose this piece as my best because i put a lot of work in to this piece.

Write compositions with a variety of sentence structures and lengths

compond:We dont know where the friend has gone, but they are no longer here to be your friend.

simple:Losing a friend is a time of sadness and mourning.

complex:She kinda felt bad because if she hadn't said anything then they would still be friends, but she had to get over it cause things happen in life that we can fix.

compond and complex:She kinda felt bad because if she hadn't said anything then they would still be friends, but she had to get over it cause things happen in life that we can fix.

7)Demonstrate correct grammar and sentence structure.

This went on for a couple of months and Faith couldn't take it anymore, so she went the office and asked if she could talk to the principle. After she talk to the principle she walked back her class room and went and sat down at her desk. Class was stared when the principle and a man in a uniform walked in and ask the teacher if the could talk. Everyone was confused, but not Faith.

Use a variety of techniques effectively to provide supportive detail in writing

One day at school Faith walked into her class room and there was a note on her desk. The teacher wasn't in the room yet so she opened the note and it said, “Everyone hates you and you should have friends because you mess everything up with everyone. And if u show this to and one I will hurt you.” Faith had a idea who wrote the note but like the note said she couldn't say anything to anyone so she put the note into her pocket and got ready for class. When she got to class she noticed that no one wanted to sit or talk to her. There was a group kids that were in the corner of the room laughing and looking straight at Faith. Faith knew that something was going on and she knew exactly who was the one starting it all. It was her ex-best friend Kaylin.

5)Write with strong organization and coherence.

Kaylin is loud, out going and really funny so that's how her and faith get a long so well. They meet each other one day at the communitys main park. They were both in 5th grade and they were both in the same class and then just became best friends and have been that way for ever since. The only difference between them is that Kaylin is friends with almost everybody else in their class and Faiths have no other friends then Kaylin.

4)Use strategies for editing

A lot of them make fun of her beause of the way she does things or the way she says things.

a lot of them make fun of her because of the way she does things or the way she says things.