Thursday, November 11, 2010
Use a variety of techniques effectively to provide supportive detail in writing
One day at school Faith walked into her class room and there was a note on her desk. The teacher wasn't in the room yet so she opened the note and it said, “Everyone hates you and you should have friends because you mess everything up with everyone. And if u show this to and one I will hurt you.” Faith had a idea who wrote the note but like the note said she couldn't say anything to anyone so she put the note into her pocket and got ready for class. When she got to class she noticed that no one wanted to sit or talk to her. There was a group kids that were in the corner of the room laughing and looking straight at Faith. Faith knew that something was going on and she knew exactly who was the one starting it all. It was her ex-best friend Kaylin.
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In this paragraph there is a snapshot and there is an explosion.
ReplyDeleteits important because then it could help people understand the story.