Thursday, November 11, 2010

5)Write with strong organization and coherence.

Kaylin is loud, out going and really funny so that's how her and faith get a long so well. They meet each other one day at the communitys main park. They were both in 5th grade and they were both in the same class and then just became best friends and have been that way for ever since. The only difference between them is that Kaylin is friends with almost everybody else in their class and Faiths have no other friends then Kaylin.
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  1. HeatherNovember 11, 2010 at 9:59 AM

    a paragraph from a story.
    i think that these few sentences flow really nicely and it really easy to read.

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  2. HeatherNovember 11, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    its important because then people can reading thing of your and they would make sence and flow really nicely

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