Thursday, November 11, 2010

3)Use strategies for revising

Your guiding hand
Your shoulder to cry on,
Somebody for you to lean on.
I want you to see that I'm always here.
I'll never be your judge or jury
Because I don't care.



Your guiding hand
Your shoulder to cry on,
Somebody for you to lean on.
I want you to see that I'm always here.
I'll never be your judge or jury
Because I don't care.

1 comment:

  1. This is a poem that i wrote.
    I changed the poem from the first one because i bolded some words because they mean a lot
    so you change things to make it better

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