Heather Lamfers
Lang Arts 9
11-1-10
Discomfort, Grief, Caring
Pain
Richard belis Said “Pain is so deep and cunning, pain can show me who i am, pain shows the world who we are, pain is my only friend.” The dictionary defines Pain as Suffering, ache, Sorrow, Grief. My defintion of Pain is something that you feel when some one you know leaves for a short or long period of time. It could also mean a lot of differnet thing to many differnet people.In a life time everybody expericence pain in some way most comine ways you feel pain is discomfort, grief and caring.
The first topic that comes to mind when taking about Pain is discomfort. Discomfort is something you would feel when you are not feeling good, hurt mentally and also phyically. There is many differnet ways to have the feeling of discomfort but most people like me I feel it the strongest when I have lost some one that is very close to me.This helps my defintion because most people feel the discomfort that I feel when pain is inflixed.
Another topic that comes up is grief. There is almost always a giref when there is pain. Like if someone makes some one else have pain they would always have the grief of making them have that pain. This word helps with my defintion because there is almost always grief after there ia pain. Like if there was someone that die that you new or was close to you. You would have the grief of knowing them and not being able to help them so they wouldn't die.
The last topic is caring. When people have pain there is also others that are caring about them. I think that caring is something that people do when there are others that are need it or just do it cause thats what they do. If there was someone that I knew that had someone close to them die I would b there caring for them lot because I know how if feel is lose someone close.
Discomfort, grief, and caring are the three most comine was you feel pain.
Discomfort, grief, and caring are very important when u think but pain. Discomfort is something you would feel if you yourself were the one in pain. Grief is something a lot of people feel when the lose someone. Then there is caring. Caring is something that is very important when you or someone else are feeling. People just have to know that when they are feeling discomfort, grief or caring that its not a bad thing. Also when people are feeling this way that they shouldn't feel weird because almost every person in the world feels these feelings when they experince pain.
Yours was pretty good, but the real life example isn't very specific.
ReplyDeleteeverything flows pretty good. your narritive hooks is kinda boring. pretty good job.
ReplyDeleteI think that your last paragraph is very good and the final statement is very good it does describe what everyone goes through when they are in pain.
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